Wednesday, July 22, 2009

Let's just tighten this up a bit

Am quite impressed by Vanity Fair's proffered edit of Palin's resignation speech -- not for the snark value, but to see what a difference in impression would be made if somebody who cared about words got to polish her speeches, even maintaining her intent. Actually, am most wowed by the edits in green, representing factual corrections by the research department -- Lincoln, Johnson, no biggie!


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